Focus Group Screening

1.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Intertitles were good and effective
Restricted narration at the end is perfect
Narrative was clear.

Improvement comments:

Repeated Rosie gets on a bit long
Make the scream play over shots
Some shots start with actors getting ready (cut).

2.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Tense
Music fits well
Nice camera angles
Good makeup
Location fits
Intertitles excellent

Improvement Comments:

Needs more added to it
Don’t get the staring into the camera
More sound effects
More close ups
Needs a jump scare

3.       Score 7/10:

Good comments:

Good use of jump scare at the end

Music is creepy
The intertitles work well

     Improvement Comments:

Maybe think of the outfit and clothing.

4.       Score  6/10:

      Good comments:

Sound
Quick Montage

      Improvement Comments:

Bite scene could be better
Zombies running better
Final shots need to be more explained.

5.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Music is creepy
Good intertitles
Body horror

Improvement comments:

Maybe only using one gunshot instead of two
Cut the gun shot short
Add jump scare

 6.       Score  4.5/10

      Good comments:

Music was good with matching intertitles
Shots were done well
Good narrative and gore.

Improvement comments:

Too short
Lack of shots
Continuity error

   
 7.       Score 5/10

Good comments:

Nice montage
Good intertitles

Improvement comments:

Very short
Outfit changed

8.       Score 6/10

       Good comments:
Like the music
Narrative was clear
Intertitles were good

Improvement comments:

Like some violence and more gore
Notepad production’s not horror
Shots linger to long

9.       Score 5/10

Good comments:

Music matches the name
Camera angles good
Lots of gore

Improvement comments:

Intertitles too quick


      10.   Score 5/10

Good comments:

Conventional characters
Music intertitles
Clear narrative

Improvement comments:

Biting in the neck- see body horror
Zombies not very zombie like
Needs a jump scare

11.   Score 6/10

Good comments:

Lighting was good

      Improvement comments:
Needs stronger ending

12.   Score 5/10

Good comments:

Liked the music fit with the intertitles
Clear narrative
Good use of gore

Improvement comments:

Long shots
Bigger variety of shots

13.   Score 5/10

      Good comments:
Good use of gore
Song matched intertitles

Improvement comments:

Narrative needs work
Variety of sots needed

14.   Score 6/10

      Good comment:
Great intertitles
Creepy music

Improvement comments:

Confusing concept
Needs a jump scare

15.   Score 4/10

Good comments:

Music and intertitles flows well
Good gore

Improvement comments:

Too many close ups
Not fluent

16.   Score 7/10

Good comments:

Sound effect is a sort of cliff hanger
 Music great

Improvement comments:

Only a bit of gore
Needs a stranger ending

17.   Sound 6/10:

Good comments:

Music is creepy
Good gore effects
Clear narrative
Conventional characters

Improvement comments:

Add more shots
Stronger ending